Sunday, April 2, 2017

WeWriWa / Snippet Sunday o4.o2.17

Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors / Snippet Sunday!

Where we last left off, Karlea remembered everything from the night before. She was getting a bit close and comfy on Armani before she realized he used his mind control ability to make her forget. He was basically testing her. The last line when we left off, was her asking if she had said no to remembering their night, what he would have done. First line is Armani's.
"Then you wouldn't have remembered."
Karlea almost breathed a sigh a relief, knowing that if her decision was to stay in the dark about their night together, he would have respected it. Not that it really mattered, it wouldn't get her out of this situation. She would need Armani near always, even if they didn't have a romantic or sexual relationship because of the bloodbond, unless she wanted to die over it. However, compared to the completely savage vampires she had encountered with Jake, Armani wasn't so bad, and probably not worth dying over, they would just need to work out some kind of arrangement. But knowing how dominating Armani was, it probably wouldn't be the arrangement she'd want. She still hated him for kidnapping her the way he did.
Karlea relaxed her arms and although Armani still held onto her wrists, he let her lower them. 
Armani smirked. "Unless, I felt like being cruel, then you would have remembered anyway."

It's probably a good thing Armani is still holding on to her.

Thanks for reading! Kids this weekend, so I'll get around to commenting when they go back to school ;)

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Bleeding Hearts & Fangs, ~Siren X

24 comments:

  1. This snippet is a bit confusing with so many names thrown around. keep it simple. The story is complicated enough. Best to you, my friend.

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    1. Thank you for your notes! It definitely helps.

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  2. That last line was a bit cruel of him. I hope she is able to find an arrangement that works with him. Have fun this weekend!

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    1. Hehehe that's so Armani, pushing every limit.

      Thanks for reading!

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  3. Hum, it feels like it's the bloodbond speaking and not her. I wonder how she is going to get out of this.

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    1. He has to always keep her on her toes ;)
      Thanks for reading!

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  4. Let's hope he doesn't feel like being cruel.
    Tweeted.

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    1. Thanks!

      Yeah, he still has that thing about him where he can be a cruel vampire. I personally wouldn't ever want to piss him off.

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  5. His last line make me think he would be put out if she demanded to forget their time together.

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    1. Yeah, that too, for sure!
      Thanks for reading!

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  6. Yes, probably a good thing he's still holding onto her.

    Oh, and look who finally got past the warning page! I didn't do anything different so someone somewhere must have fixed something.

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    1. I'm glad it worked for you! I still can't get it on Chrome, so still using Safari, just for my blog.

      I really wonder why its doing this??

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  7. I can't see this relationship going smoothly!

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    1. Its going to be a very rocky one, lol.

      Thanks for reading!

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  8. I think she's right to be concerned about her future with him!

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    1. With his attitude and behavior, yes she is!

      Thanks for reading!

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  9. Tough spot. Glad he isn't as bad as he might be.

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    1. It is, but she knows it could always be worse, at least she knows he loves her.

      Thanks for reading!

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  10. "...compared to the completely savage vampires she had encountered with Jake, Armani wasn't so bad." After his last comment, will she retract that statement?

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    1. She just might. thanks for stoping by!

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  11. He might not be so bad, but I'm rooting for her to be the one to dominate him. ;)

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    1. That would be so hot! hehehe ;)

      Thanks for reading!

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  12. The kidnapping is douche move on his part, but I'm glad they are working through it. Kind of. :) :)

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